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This is a story about a different look into someone who takes her own life.

She wasn't popular, she wasn't pretty, at least she didn't think so, she didn't have a lot of friends, her parents had no time for her and her boyfriend dropped her her like a bad habit.

She was sixteen years old, with her whole life ahead of her. she stood 5 foot 4", permed curly long brown hair, big brown eyes, braces on her teeth, she wore contacts instead of her eyeglasses, with the the biggest dimples you ever saw when she smiled, freckles on her face along with a few pimples.

But many of the kids at the High School made fun of her as none of her clothes were up to date.
Her teachers were good at teaching, but none to confide in.

Day in, day out she hated the world she was living in and began to think of ways to take her life. She decided on sleeping pills because after all, all she wanted was to never wake up.
Now her Mom had plenty as she would take them here and there to sleep on her sleepless nights.

September 23rd at 9:30 p.m.
She took the whole bottle of sleeping pills. Her body started getting numb, her eyes were very heavy.
Soon she is gone, sleeping as it may seem: suddenly she is awake only her body is laying on the bed and she is standing in front of this huge bright chair and over to the right of the chair a man stood by.

She said, My God, what have I done? as she kneels down on her knees and said Jesus Christ is Lord as tears rolled down her face. The man by the chair whose name is Jesus said, I was always with you, see you were never alone. Then he said look (stretching forth his hand) she gasps as she sees people at her parents house, why even her Mother was coming unglued and her Dad had tears rolling down his face.

Then she says looking at Jesus, they never acted like they loved me or even cared, but Jesus said, you wouldn't let them! The next thing she knew there was another man standing beside her and said ever so smugly, look what I got you to do. She look at Jesus and said please make him leave. But Jesus looked at her and said, you are going with him, for he is your Father.

And the girl began to scream as she felt her soul leaving and falling into a hole, she screamed and cussed God.

Now Satan begins to laugh at her right in her face as he begins to tell her how he has deceived her all of her life. And as her eyes were opened she kneeled on her knees, but Satan and his angels began to tell her how late she was for that.

September 26th at 10:30 a.m.

"Her Parents" buried her today...
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