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About This Author
Battywyn🎶Prep!  , also known as Michelle Tuesday, is a musician, educator and writer hailing from Columbus, Ohio.
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La Bene Vita
I am a professional musician , worship leader , small business owner , songwriter , aspiring author and freelance nonfiction writer with a chemical engineering degree .
But that's just my resume.
My profile of qualifications is only one of the ways in which I am unique. Here I chronicle my personal and professional goals and my efforts to achieve them. Occasionally I fail. Mostly, I take daily baby steps toward all my long-term goals. Much like the stories I pen, the songs I compose, and the businesses I run, I am always a work in progress.
October 27, 2025 at 9:26pm October 27, 2025 at 9:26pm
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#scopecreepersanonymous
I asked ChatGPT and Gemini to review a short story I wrote. The feedback I got from both on various revisions pretty much defines me as a writer:
Gemini said:
 This is a fantastic opening.
 This revision elevates the story from a good setup to a very compelling narrative fragment.
ChatGPT said:
 This is a polished and highly effective opening to a series or novel.
 You should feel very confident in this draft. Are you planning to continue this story or move on to a different project?
ChatGPT did redeem itself a little with this one:
If you plan to submit or expand this into a series, this could serve as Chapter One or a standalone “origin” story.
But in general, this is the story of my writing life. Everything I write is just a chapter of something bigger.
Scope creep. It's no wonder I never finish anything. |
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