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Native to the Americas, the turkey vulture (Cathartes aura) travels widely in search of sustenance. While usually foraging alone, it relies on other individuals of its species for companionship and mutual protection. Sometimes misunderstood, sometimes feared, sometimes shunned, it nevertheless performs an important role in the ecosystem.

This scavenger bird is a marvel of efficiency. Rather than expend energy flapping its wings, it instead locates uplifting columns of air, and spirals within them in order to glide to greater heights. This behavior has been mistaken for opportunism, interpreted as if it is circling doomed terrestrial animals destined to be its next meal. In truth, the vulture takes advantage of these thermals to gain the altitude needed glide longer distances, flying not out of necessity, but for the joy of it.

It also avoids the exertion necessary to capture live prey, preferring instead to feast upon that which is already dead. In this behavior, it resembles many humans.

It is not what most of us would consider to be a pretty bird. While its habits are often off-putting, or even disgusting, to members of more fastidious species, the turkey vulture helps to keep the environment from being clogged with detritus. Hence its Latin binomial, which translates to English as "golden purifier."

I rarely know where the winds will take me next, or what I might find there. The journey is the destination.


September 6, 2025 at 1:02pm
September 6, 2025 at 1:02pm
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Well, today's "Blog Week Birthday Bastion 2025Open in new Window. [E] prompt is a bit different from what I'm used to. But I've always said I can write about anything. However, I never promised it'd be good.

The full prompt is below, in the dropnote, but it's basically: do two reviews.

This doesn't give me much room, so today, I'll just share the reviews I did, which are both for entries related to yesterday's prompt. The reviews are public anyway, so I'm not sharing some sort of secret information or anything like that.


"Birthday Bastion 2025 | Day FiveOpen in new Window. from "\\ Exurgency // Open in new Window. [18+] by LdyPhoenix Author Icon

A great illustration of the tension between what we want and what we want. That is, to give up (or mostly give up, in this case) something we love to achieve better health or some other desired outcome: it’s a real trade-off.

The song in the video prompt is a humorous ode to coffee, and this entry is mostly about the subject matter of the song rather than the video itself. This is not a criticism; it’s an acknowledgement that we can take prompts in all kinds of different directions.

While I’ve never developed a taste for coffee myself, I do understand missing something that you used to enjoy. Could I give up something I love in exchange for the possibility (not the guarantee) of better health and/or a few more days of life? Probably not, but I enjoyed reading this entry anyway.

The only thing I might suggest is to go into more detail about ā€œcoffee might disappearā€ and ā€œenvironmental impact,ā€ but I realize that this could end up in controversy, and I probably wouldn’t go there, either.


"Those Little ThingsOpen in new Window. from "Racing Through LifeOpen in new Window. [18+] by Kit Author Icon

We all have our favorite things, and other things we don’t enjoy. You say this is ā€œan interesting challengeā€ because the prompt is about things that you don’t partake in, but in this entry, you rose to the challenge very well.

Like you, I prefer tea to coffee, which probably made this video prompt less relatable. But turning it into an entry about the things you do enjoy is a good way to address the prompt. One might say it goes off on a tangent, but there’s absolutely no reason not to.

One thing I appreciated about this entry was the organization, with bolded section headers. This helps make it easy to follow. And while not everyone is going to share your preferences, you do well in explaining what it is about these things that you enjoy. Not that we’re owed such an explanation, but it makes things more relatable: while everyone likes different things, we mostly like those different things for similar reasons.


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