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My name is Joy, and I love to write. Why poetry, here? Because poetry uplifts its writer, and if she is lucky enough, her readers, too. Around us, so many objects abound to write about. Once a poet starts with a smallest, most trivial object, he shall discover that his pen will spill out what is most delicate or most majestic hidden inside him. Since the classics sometimes dealt with lofty subjects with a lofty language, a person with poetry in his soul may incline to emulate that. That is understandable. Poetry does that to a person: it enlarges the soul and gives it wings. Yet, to really soar, a poet needs to take off from the ground. Kiya's gift. I love it!
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Sep 30, 2005 at 9:50pm
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Re: Another #1 Thanks
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This to me is a "Wow!" poem. Beginning lines are strong and the ending is just as strong. Indented lines in between have all the windmill power to keep the poem flowing.
You did an amazing job fitting in song titles with the difficult passkey ring and Writing.com prompts. Actually "fitting" in is an understatement since the songs supply the insight to the character in the poem.
A tremendous poem in every sense. *Smile*

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