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Sep 30, 2005 at 9:50pm
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This to me is a "Wow!" poem. Beginning lines are strong and the ending is just as strong. Indented lines in between have all the windmill power to keep the poem flowing. You did an amazing job fitting in song titles with the difficult passkey ring and Writing.com prompts. Actually "fitting" in is an understatement since the songs supply the insight to the character in the poem. A tremendous poem in every sense. ![]()
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