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Jan 14, 2010 at 3:15am
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I think inserting journal parts is a fantastic idea. It gives the usual prose a nice break and switches to something different, exciting. It's especially good if your narrating in the 3rd person, then we get to be inside the character's head in the 1st person journal entries; that makes for a nice contrast. |
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