Hello, I'm new to the site and i'm desperately trying to advertise my writing. I would love some reviews! Good, bad, or ugly (preferably good ;) but be honest with me). I'm going to send it out to hopefully get accepted by a publisher soon and I want to know what to expect.

So, if you like ancient mysteries, mythological creatures, spirited characters, and a fun, dangerous, new twist on the vampire craze, take a look at my book because i wrote it with the goal to be the next big name out in the literary world. What do you think? Will this be the story that will make it to the shelves? I would love to know what you think ^.^

http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/user_id/carac624