I reviewed the story mentioned below, saw urgent need for the writer to learn how to properly use verb tense with narrative and dialog. I showed her several errors and how to correct them, and suggested she learn for herself her other errors by reading the item aloud to listen to the verb errors. She sent the note below...then I read the long story again and found only one additional error. She was especially grateful for the help and final review and, I doubt she makes such errors so much again. ANN

her first response:

If you don't mind going back to reread, I made the edits suggested.

On 4/12/14 at 4:42am, in a review for "Summers of Love: Elizabeth's Story" , best4writing-Peace2AllLesbians wrote.



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