Hi apenny4urthts,

While your first two entries were great, this one will need to be redone if you would like it to be eligible for the prizes at the end of the month. Just removing a handful of instances of a single word and otherwise reposting the lyrics in their entirety isn't really in the spirit of blackout poetry. Just let me know once you've updated the piece and I'll be happy to give it another look!

Best,
Jeff