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Oct 9, 2023 at 3:27pm
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Looks like a big plot spoiler, I wonder if that part about Althea should be writer-only knowledge at this point. Or perhaps only hinted at?  eg a mention of what Althea's relationship with him is, and if she is helpful or a hindrance to his investigation.   But please feel free to ignore my comment! Hope  | 
		
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