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Oct 14, 2023 at 10:21pm
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Re: My Villain is a "Caddy Shacker"!
Cool beans. It certainly does put him as the highlight. Mine is one long paragraph still with internal view. His heartbreak and what he wanted. Yours plays out nicely.

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