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Oct 18, 2023 at 4:34pm
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Okay, suggestions: 1) What is the theme you are working on? Can your character have a sub-plot related to that? 2) The other two characters are clearly going to end up in the same place - how does this third one end up there as well? Or does he not make it? 3) Instead of focusing on the human, focus on the dog in that sub-plot and make it about the animal. 4) Is the character a different archetype - e.g. the mentor - and so flits in and out of the story without a subplot of his own (Yoda in Empire Strikes Back)? 5) Is the character necessary? Anyway, good luck!  | 
		
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