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I am a 40 year old married mother of two teenage boys. I live for writing, especially romance. Love the happily ever after scenerio. The best thing about writing for me is the ability to lose yourself in your work, and feel as if you've accomplished something great. At the end of the day, that's all that really matters.
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Just a quick note to explain my choice. Chapter 1 was a bit too 'cluttered,' for lack of a better word. You were introducing so many characters in the first paragraph, I felt lost as I read along. Were they really necessary so early in the story? Perhaps, ... but perhaps not. And I liked the lighter touch when talking about the possible relationship between Piper and Taylor in your Alternate Chapter 1.
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