Kimarie Manhart-Freeman: Self-Taught Poetess and Writer

Kimarie Manhart-Freeman is a poetess who delights in the Romance genre. Her work is unconventional, with a flippant disregard for the traditional constraints of written poetry. Life experiences wind their way into her works without shame or remorse. She makes the reader feel as if they are invited to her sitting room, sharing tea and chatting in strictest confidence.She retells her private life to readers in poetic form to share, uplift, commiserate and befriend, nothing more. Kimarie believes that it is the feeling, not the form of a piece that captivates. Her work is rich in imagery. It is decadent in it's frequent use of antiquated phraseology intermingled with witty modern day understanding. She believes in doing everything with passion, and it is evident in her many works. She is highly opinionated and non-apologetic about expressing her views. She is a follower of Jesus Yeshua ; and is active in Messianic ministry. She lives in Easton PA, with her husband and family. She has a small catering business that offers comfort and exotic foods; and delightful baked goods. She can be contacted at cardamomtea66@yahoo.com.

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Long-Traveled Rain

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The rain travels the world and revisits me telling me where it has been.
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Review of Long-Traveled Rain

Review by Mina~

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It's been a pleasure to review your story "Long-Traveled Rain"

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This is beautiful poem. The poem Long-Traveled Rain tells the story of rain who traveled the world and share its experience with the poet. I like the enchanting picture the poet have painted here. It reminds me the monsoon rain in my country. Today it is raining here, I could hear the booming sound of clouds from my home. And this is perfect poem for this day. I like the rainy day because rainy day images gives me inspiration, it renewed our hopes.

I found this poem is condensed structure. “velvet ground “worms “frogs” “logs” “bugs” all the natural things blended together creates a beautiful rainy day picture. The tone of the poem is filled with hope, I especially like the last stanza

“Breathing in I now smell the coming rain,
and inhale earth's life into my core,
the weary rain that rests upon my face,
long-traveled, now visits me once more.”

Mina

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