Review of Marking the New Year

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Marking the New Year

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A celebration
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Review of Marking the New Year

Review by Mina~

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

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Hi!Fyn

This is my second review for your poem, as I am taking part for July Challenge for "The WDC Angel Army"

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I saw your name on the Port Review Authors for July. It's been a pleasure to review your poem "Marking the New Year"

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

Beautifully started with the lines “December's blue moon still hung heavy in the sky”. I really liked this celebration poem because of the enchanted scenery you have painted here.

It feels like a beautiful light awakening in the darker shadows of winter and shines bright. I found it reflected in the lines “of new beginnings, stretched out
into the moon-gilded night.”

I like this because it’s wrote from life’s experience . I like the little rhyming of your poem and how each line breaks. I feel this poem is positive and soothing.

Mina

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