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My name is Joy, and I love to write. Why poetry, here? Because poetry uplifts its writer, and if she is lucky enough, her readers, too. Around us, so many objects abound to write about. Once a poet starts with a smallest, most trivial object, he shall discover that his pen will spill out what is most delicate or most majestic hidden inside him. Since the classics sometimes dealt with lofty subjects with a lofty language, a person with poetry in his soul may incline to emulate that. That is understandable. Poetry does that to a person: it enlarges the soul and gives it wings. Yet, to really soar, a poet needs to take off from the ground. Kiya's gift. I love it!
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Beneath the Spring Rain Open in new Window. [E]
Rain is compulsory when nature renews itself
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi!Joy

I am taking part for July Challenge for"The WDC Angel ArmyOpen in new Window.. I saw your name on the Port Review Authors for July. It's been a pleasure to review your poem "Beneath the Spring RainOpen in new Window. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

I really liked this poem because of the metaphor you have used here for examples: “ash-colored veins” “millions of eyelids blink “the steel needles of spring “Twisting in her hands her keys to rebirth “
You painted the season spring beautifully. I like the little rhyming and
the architecture of lines and shapes, scenes and stories.

The poet uses the colors and shapes, sounds, smells, touch, and feelings to create the images.

I like the last stanza “splashes in question marks on the slippery street,
while she laments frizzled hair,
instead of frizzled dreams.” and I feel that this is positive. It has good message.

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