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My name is Joy, and I love to write. Why poetry, here? Because poetry uplifts its writer, and if she is lucky enough, her readers, too. Around us, so many objects abound to write about. Once a poet starts with a smallest, most trivial object, he shall discover that his pen will spill out what is most delicate or most majestic hidden inside him. Since the classics sometimes dealt with lofty subjects with a lofty language, a person with poetry in his soul may incline to emulate that. That is understandable. Poetry does that to a person: it enlarges the soul and gives it wings. Yet, to really soar, a poet needs to take off from the ground. Kiya's gift. I love it!
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Inside the Darkness Open in new Window. [13+]
The light in the center of darkness. Maybe a vampire isn't all that bad.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am taking part for July Challenge for"The WDC Angel ArmyOpen in new Window.. I saw your name on the Port Review Authors for July. It's been a pleasure to review your poem "Inside the DarknessOpen in new Window. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

I like this supernatural story about hunting vampire. I appreciated it’s descriptions and presentations. You have good characters descriptions for example “He looked rather magnificent as reddish sparkles radiated out of his eyes, forming a direct contrast to his sparkling white pointed teeth” . The setting and the plot is absolutely fantastic. The dialogues floated beautifully between the characters. I loved the endings “That's when I feel, in my blood, a wild wind swirling, singing, pulsating from a center so bright. “ it is certainly different than the usual vampire mysteries stories I have read!!*Bats* *Bats**Bats*

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