A changeling spirit,
constantly evolving,
revolving around an inner core,
spinning forth legend and lore,
stories and lives
as I come to grips
with who and what I am,
have been and may be.
I am a phoenix:
rising ever above and beyond!
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Given: Jul 11, 2018 at 7:42am
Length: 1,431 Characters |
1,164 w/o WritingML
Hello Fyn,
I enjoyed reading your story. I am no expert and what's following is my humble review which you may choose to ignore.
Why I chose this item:
This is a part of Angel Army July Challenge and I was to review something from your port. I found this, though I couldn't pronounce the title I wanted to read it.
My favorites parts:
I liked the end which came as a surprise. I also liked the concept that went behind the piece. You have shown that even traditional things can be enjoyed in a new way.
Characters:
Both the husband and wife seemed to be pretty cool in tight situations.
StoryLine/Plot :
The story line was simple with lot of fun and improvisations. It had a light mood to it.
Action/Flow :
The flow was smooth except at the where I re-read. But it was a good surprise and a good dream too.
Ending:
I loved the ending. A beautiful dream to start Christmas with.
Overall impression:
Overall it was a fun reading.
A few Typos:
None that I noticed...
Nice piece...
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