Hello Fyn,

It seems like forever since I've visited your Placesettings Folder but I haven't forgotten! I'm super glad you're featured as a port raid recipient in the Angel Review Forum as it gave me an excuse to prioritize reviewing you.

I greatly enjoyed this slice of your life and look forward to reading more of your stories.

You crafted a great real-life story that held my complete attention from beginning to end. I felt all my muscles tense up when the person dropped the bag at your feet.

Your pacing was great. You evoked my senses. You really brought your wall experiences life. I felt like I was there, experiencing the story. You are talented!

In the spirit of helpfulness, I do think more explanation of the second wall (or at least naming it, as you did the Berlin Wall) might be helpful, especially for non veterans. But the meaning is clear and the story was well done.

Thank you for sharing your true life story!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler


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