Hello Fyn,

You crafted an intriguing poem that held my complete attention from beginning to end. I can totally see why it made the finals for the RAW competition, even though I don't know what the RAW competition is .

You're one of the few authors who use words that I have to look up. I must admit that I think I have a great vocabulary, but you are on a totally different level (higher, of course). This time it was "ossuary" I figured it had to do with bones but wasn't sure beyond that. So thank you for the new word!

My favorite line of this creative poem of yours was: "Entwined in an armor of deception designed" ... both for the inline rime and musical quality of the line.

Thank you for sharing your poem!

Once again, I'm super glad you're featured as a port raid recipient in the Angel Review Forum and look forward to reading more of your stories.

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler


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