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My name is Joy, and I love to write. Why poetry, here? Because poetry uplifts its writer, and if she is lucky enough, her readers, too. Around us, so many objects abound to write about. Once a poet starts with a smallest, most trivial object, he shall discover that his pen will spill out what is most delicate or most majestic hidden inside him. Since the classics sometimes dealt with lofty subjects with a lofty language, a person with poetry in his soul may incline to emulate that. That is understandable. Poetry does that to a person: it enlarges the soul and gives it wings. Yet, to really soar, a poet needs to take off from the ground. Kiya's gift. I love it!
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A Journey To Love Open in new Window. [ASR]
The search for true love through the mind's eye
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Review of A Journey To Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi!Joy

I am taking part for July Challenge for"The WDC Angel ArmyOpen in new Window.. I saw your name on the Port Review Authors for July. It's been a pleasure to review your poem "A Journey To LoveOpen in new Window. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

This poem is significant not only the words but also the rhyming. It has lovely romantic thoughts woven inside every line. You started beautifully In the city, an expanse of rubble, Hopes, smiles, sins, radicals and trouble. Your words are so pure and true. Yes, true love is hard to find because it is extraordinary in your words “tough job for mortals where angels fall”.

I feel this poem is strong, positive, and bright and inspirational. I like the last stanza His image faded, though mine stayed, you see, From the deep, his voice said, "I'm you; you are me." It packed with message.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Thank for sharing!

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