Review of The Frog and the Bucket

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A changeling spirit,
constantly evolving,
revolving around an inner core,
spinning forth legend and lore,
stories and lives
as I come to grips
with who and what I am,
have been and may be.
I am a phoenix:
rising ever above and beyond!

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The Frog and the Bucket

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Never give up!
by Fyn-dragon

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Review of The Frog and the Bucket

Review by Mina~

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: E

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Hi Fyn!

I am taking part for July Challenge for "The WDC Angel Army"

, I saw your name on the Port Review Authors for July. It's been a pleasure to review your poem "The Frog and the Bucket"

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

Excellent poem. This narrative poem of yours is rather epic. It has important messages about why we never give up no matter what the situation would be. I like the way you crafted it through the frog and boy story.

I like the rhyme shapes, scenes and stories. I feel this poem is positive, cheerful and amusing.

I like the lines
He had to get out.
There just must be a way.
So he breast-stroked and paddled
Until the next day.

I enjoyed your poem.

Mina

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