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Missing in Action Open in new Window. [E]
When a dear friend vanishes, leaving only questions and sadness behind.
by Fyn-dragon Author Icon
Review of Missing in Action  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Missing in Action" Open in new Window. on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" Open in new Window.

This poem is significant not only the words but also the rhyming. I like the title as well. This is a beautiful poem for a friend. I got a sense of sadness laced in this poem.

Your words are so pure and true. When we have lost a good friend and it's hard to describe the feelings. I feel this poem is strong emotional, bright and inspirational.

I like the last stanza what had happened to distill your essence
such that we vainly grasp
yet find nothing
except a wisp of words.
These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Thank for sharing!

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