Hi!
I am taking part for July Challenge for "The WDC Angel Army"  , I saw your name on the Port Review Authors for July. It's been a pleasure to review your poem "Flight Home" This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
I really liked this sestina poem because of the way you painted life. I like the metaphor and the bright rhyming. I like the story of Flight Home. The words “falling snow” “ geese” “slow motion waves” “wintery sky” all the things blended together creates a lovely nature scene. I could imagine where they are.
I like the architecture of lines and shapes, scenes and stories. I feel that it wrote from life experience, senses and emotions, and it looks great.
The poet uses the colors and shapes, sounds, smells, touch, and feelings to create the images.
I like the last stanza
Overhead the geese are shaftless arrows shot
from an instinctual bow piercing the morning sky
with their raucous goodbyes. Time waves.
It has good message.
I think you can add a photograph of nature so that readers could visualize what the author is conveying.
  Mina 
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