Howdy, Ruwth!
This is pretty good. I like how it's a story inside of a story, and you even brought attention to a disorder that NEEDS more attention!
I've run across a couple of people who I believed had autism, but to this day I'm still not sure. I knew of one young man (a special needs student at the college) who could remember anybody's birthday if you just told him once. I only ran into 'Andy' very seldom, but one day about 5 years after I'd told him my BD, I asked him again. Sure enough, he not only remembered the day and the year, but he also remembered where I was born!
Nice job with this, Ruwth. A cheap umbrella? If I saw that pic and didn't know what the prompt was for this month, I'd say it looks like a woman being stabbed with a broom!
One suggestion:
'but his sentences were usually off the wall things(,) not answers.
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! Have a wonderful day, and good luck in the contest!
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