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My name is Joy, and I love to write. Why poetry, here? Because poetry uplifts its writer, and if she is lucky enough, her readers, too. Around us, so many objects abound to write about. Once a poet starts with a smallest, most trivial object, he shall discover that his pen will spill out what is most delicate or most majestic hidden inside him. Since the classics sometimes dealt with lofty subjects with a lofty language, a person with poetry in his soul may incline to emulate that. That is understandable. Poetry does that to a person: it enlarges the soul and gives it wings. Yet, to really soar, a poet needs to take off from the ground. Kiya's gift. I love it!
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Under The April Rain Open in new Window. [E]
on "spring" for Writer's Cramp--not exactly a villanelle
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Joy!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Under The April RainOpen in new Window. on behalf of "The WDC Angel ArmyOpen in new Window.

*Butterflyb* Initial Impression: I like this poem because each stanza is beautiful and so enchanted. The poem captures the moment of life.

*Idea* Theme and Creativity: Being with nature is really wonderful. Though I find it really hard living in a concrete jungle.
I like reading nature poems, because, It makes me feel connected. They cherished my heart.
This poem consists of three rimed stanzas and beautifully ended. The word vividly describes the feelings towards nature. The rhyme makes this poem brighter; the flow of this poem is wonderful.


*Tree* Favorite Lines: The sordid dirt, sage messages ordain,
For intricate rhythms to promenade
With passion, swirling under the April rain.


Great write and the way you displayed it!!

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