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Web~Witch is living and writing with a passion, surrounded by the picturesque beauty of a quaint New England town in Massachusetts. She is inspired by the gorgeous maples, the rolling hills and the vast sea. As a mother of five children, four daughters and one son, she has learned that life offers many challenges, yet, has found that there is always a path of least resistance. She enjoys every day and what it has to offer. Her dream is to pass along as much positivity as possible to others. Enjoying life to its fullest , laughing, spreading joy and humor and paying it forward is what describes the heart and soul of this woman. Welcome to her little corner of the world. Do enjoy some New England charm and warmth while you are visiting. Ta, WW
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No Appointment Necessary Open in new Window. [18+]
Lou Ryan's new case: Dames, Gams, Goons, Goners & Bribes
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi Webbie!

I just read a chapter of Lou Ryan's new case told in first person views. It's been a pleasure to review your story "No Appointment NecessaryOpen in new Window. on behalf of "The WDC Angel ArmyOpen in new Window.. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

*Bulletg* TITLE:The title fits this story.

*Bulletg* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is good story. great characters, and an interesting plot-line. I like the suspense of the story.

*Books1*THE STORY: Lou Ryan's was a private detective. He works in Lou Ryan detective agency. Lou Ryan's prepared himself to stand up for justice. In this story you paints him beautifully.

*FishB*SETTING:In a modern time.
*Bulletg*CHARACTERS:All the characters well developed. I like the character Lou Ryan's.

*Bulletg*DIALOG: Dialogue floated normally between the characters .

*Starg*OVERALL IMPRESSION: Wonderful story. I enjoyed it reading.

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