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My name is Joy, and I love to write. Why poetry, here? Because poetry uplifts its writer, and if she is lucky enough, her readers, too. Around us, so many objects abound to write about. Once a poet starts with a smallest, most trivial object, he shall discover that his pen will spill out what is most delicate or most majestic hidden inside him. Since the classics sometimes dealt with lofty subjects with a lofty language, a person with poetry in his soul may incline to emulate that. That is understandable. Poetry does that to a person: it enlarges the soul and gives it wings. Yet, to really soar, a poet needs to take off from the ground. Kiya's gift. I love it!

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THIRST

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Reading gave me wings. All of you please keep on writing.
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Review of THIRST

Review by Sharmelling Blessing

In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army

Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

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My name is Sharmelle and I'll be reviewing your piece today from Angel Army Review. I am sorry I am not really familiar with non-rhyming poetry, but I will try my best with this review ok. Thank you for sharing your writing, and I hope this is helpful!

I like your "THIRST" poem even though it does not rhyme like I am used too. I encountered no distractions. I found no technical problems. I like your last stanza because it tell us what words are in this stanza.

Keep Writing!!!

PS I am also giving out this Review because I gave out a package in my fundraiser that included... 10 Poetry reviews for 1 for winner and 1 each for 9 of your friends. Eyestar won the package and chose you for one of the reviews for me to accomplish. Sorry, I am late on doing this I just lost one of my dogs this week.

Many Blessings, Sharmelle

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You responded to this review 11/09/2019 @ 3:48pm EST