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My name is Joy, and I love to write. Why poetry, here? Because poetry uplifts its writer, and if she is lucky enough, her readers, too. Around us, so many objects abound to write about. Once a poet starts with a smallest, most trivial object, he shall discover that his pen will spill out what is most delicate or most majestic hidden inside him. Since the classics sometimes dealt with lofty subjects with a lofty language, a person with poetry in his soul may incline to emulate that. That is understandable. Poetry does that to a person: it enlarges the soul and gives it wings. Yet, to really soar, a poet needs to take off from the ground. Kiya's gift. I love it!
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 GOOD STUFF! Open in new Window. [E]
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Greetings, Joy!
First off, glad you're OK. We were a little worried about ya for bit!
This is pretty good! This main character is the most egotistical moron in the world, or he's just dumber than a rock! Probably both!
I love how you portrayed him. Having him sit there as a week, then two, go by as his dear wife 'slept' was great, and adding that part about the smell was a nice touch! I'm guessing that was something the neighbors were complaining about too.
But it was that ending that made this shine. Yeah, this dude knows his 'paperwork', doesn't he? 'Tis no wonder he didn't/isn't getting any customers! *Laugh*
Great job, Joy!
One tiny niggle in an otherwise excellent piece:
"...You know what, Randy? (")About your offer, I think, I'll pass." (don't need those quotation marks cuz this is still part of the quote)
Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend! It was a 'joy' to read, and have a marvelous day/evening/week!


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