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Web~Witch is living and writing with a passion, surrounded by the picturesque beauty of a quaint New England town in Massachusetts. She is inspired by the gorgeous maples, the rolling hills and the vast sea. As a mother of five children, four daughters and one son, she has learned that life offers many challenges, yet, has found that there is always a path of least resistance. She enjoys every day and what it has to offer. Her dream is to pass along as much positivity as possible to others. Enjoying life to its fullest , laughing, spreading joy and humor and paying it forward is what describes the heart and soul of this woman. Welcome to her little corner of the world. Do enjoy some New England charm and warmth while you are visiting. Ta, WW
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One Busy Night in Chicago Open in new Window. [18+]
1930's Chicago,-- Back Street Private Detective, a Girl and a Gangster
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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It's been a pleasure to review your story "One Busy Night in ChicagoOpen in new Window. on behalf of "The WDC Angel ArmyOpen in new Window.

I just read your detective story about a Girl and a Gangster and I think I will read some other stories of Lou Ryan’s .

I like the setting of the story how you described the surroundings. Dialogues flowed beautifully. You described the fight with accurate and believable actions. I liked the range of problems and the way you solved the mystery. Especially the lines “I opened all the pigeon cages and spooked the birds until they flew off the roof making a racket. A nervous Vinny looked up at all those birds flying wildly “.

Great write and so thoughtful!!

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