Wow! Nice poem. Congratulations on 2nd place. It greatly deserves the honor. Beautiful writing.
Title and Description - The title is perfect and definitely drew my attention. I wanted to read about 'The Voice of God'. I'd change the description to include a line or two from your writing. I think it would help draw in more people to read your poem. You can always add the poetry contest at the bottom of the piece.
Theme/Subject Matter:- It's about God's children being able to hear His voice. It's not a voice screaming down from the heavens. It's a small, still voice, that whispers to your soul.
Characters - The person accepting God is showing how doubt can arise even when at the altar. But hold on, and don't give up. The reward is priceless!
Originality/Creativity:- A creative look at showing how beautiful a life with Jesus can be.
Setting - A perfect setting that allowed me to visualize and take to heart and soul each line of your piece.
Emotion/Impact: - Being a Christian, it made a strong impact on me. As I know the feeling of being blessed with a relationship and being able to discern His voice.
My Favorite Part: -
The sound of His voice
It's the voice that set me free.
Because it's a freedom that surpasses all others.
Summary: I greatly enjoyed your piece. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
Review #4708560
KEEP ON WRITING ON! 
My review has been submitted for consideration in "
You responded to this review 10/04/2024 @ 10:07pm EDT