Hello tj wanderlust-words-in-motion !

This blog post of yours was featured in my news feed and I remembered Andre's President's Day blog challenge and that you recently gave me a review so I have the added incentive of Gaby's new "Review Your Reviewer" challenge and decided to give you a review. I was also interested in your take on the President's Day blog challenge. I hope you enjoy this review and find it encouraging and uplifting.


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I loved your sense of humor and hoped this was a fictional story. Well done!

You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Well done!



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

I really hope that was fiction but it read like a true story. Either way, Ole Mellonhead and anyone like her ought never be in charge of young (or any) children. The shame. But you (or your character) didn't let her get you down. Well done!


I laughed at your reason for being disqualified to run for President. Though it's actually sad... sigh. In the context you put it in, it was funny. Well done!


I loved your conclusion. Again, whether true or not, it's a great punchline and end to your story. Well done!


I don't know what most children are told nowadays either. Thankfully, I know that my nephews (all boys in their generation) are encouraged to pursue their dreams (and gain the knowledge, skills and abilities to do so).


I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your blog post. Well done!


Your blog post was interesting to me and made me want to read your next one. Well done!

Though I still have no idea what I'm going to write for Andre's thing. Thank the Good Lord, there are no Mellonheads in my history. Though not all of my teachers were great, none were horrible, and some were amazingly wonderful.



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's perfect as it is. Well done!



CONCLUSION:
You have a great writing style and sense of humor and I enjoy reading your blog posts and other writings. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your time, heart, spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler



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