A changeling spirit,
constantly evolving,
revolving around an inner core,
spinning forth legend and lore,
stories and lives
as I come to grips
with who and what I am,
have been and may be.
I am a phoenix:
rising ever above and beyond!
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Given: Aug 30, 2024 at 12:09pm
Length: 1,171 Characters |
1,060 w/o WritingML
Greetings,
I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge
I love how you've managed to work with the guidelines of this poem and create something with lasting meaning and significance. It feels solemn like a wedding vow. I struggled with trying to fit mine together while giving it some intelligent meaning and theme while keeping within the syllable counts... In fact I'm pretty sure I didn't do it correctly
The theme of fidelity and strength under the trials of life is expressed well here. I think this would look nice written out in script on fancy paper as a gift to a loved one. I enjoyed reading it.
Review #4772283
That's why the poets of yore would add an accent over the é, to create an extra syllable. See? That's why I avoid form poetry at all costs 
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