Hi ruwth

I'm sending this review in connection with "I Write in 2024" .


Positives

I enjoyed the level of reflection that you included in this piece. Having a prescribed step-by-step process for looking at your goals and objectives, and then applying it to your own thinking and work habits is a great technique and I appreciate the fact that you're being up front and honest about the areas where you're struggling with those steps.


Suggestions

The one suggestion I have, and this is more specific to my personal challenge of having to review your entry for "Invalid Item"  than anything else, is that it seems like this is a multi-step process and it's a little unclear what I'm supposed to be focused on. You mention that you wrote something called "I Am A Failure" but this is a blog entry called "How To..." and then there's a bitem link in the middle of the item for something called "Make Your Dreams Come True." For "Invalid Item" , I'm reviewing "How To..." because that's the link that was provided in the entry in the forum, but you might want to make a distinction in the item itself where you want your audience's attention focused. Even a few additional words of clarification would help, I think.


Overall

Overall, I enjoyed reading this item and thought you did a good job with the critical thinking skills encouraged by the activity. Nice job!


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Jeff
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