Greetings, Fyn!
I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.
Ah, those midnight mysteries! You've chosen an amusing one for your poem. I like the free verse, conversational style, and the idea of your little doggie hogging the whole bed is one that I'm sure a lot of pet owners can identify with.
The only thing I can suggest is adding a line count and a note as to prompt... Actually, if each of your PPC5 poems is a separate item, you may want to gather them all into a folder to keep them tidy. Perhaps you've already done this. A third genre would be good too, perhaps Comedy or Animal.
Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing 
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