Hello, Joy!
INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I enjoyed reading your "My Biggest Worry" blog post today, and could totally relate to what you shared in it.
Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end every time.
MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:
Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging. It is meant to be honest and respectful, and in accordance with WDC guidelines.
I remember seeing this prompt and wanting to write that day but, like tonight, I was running late so didn't get to do it. I'm glad I got to read your answer though. The prompt interested me, so your title drew me in and I clicked and read your blog post and thought it was well written, so I decided to give you a review as a little anniversary gift. Happiest anniversary wishes to you and best wishes on your writing future too! I'm joining you in hoping that this greatest worry does not come to pass!
You bring up many excellent points and I totally empathize with you. I sure hope we can avoid a third world war. I liked your idea about boycotting the war starters... unless they are defending themselves, but I guess that would mean they didn't start it, right? I do believe in self defense, both in national and personal realms.
The Gandhi quote you included was perfect for your post and hopefully will be shared with people who can make a difference so they can think about it. They need to.
My favorite sentence was: "I just hope people and countries do not take sides and let the fights take their own course, and most importantly, let the rest of us live in peace." Me too! That reminds me to pray again for world peace right now.
I thought you did a great job with the prompt for yesterday. If I had had time to answer it, I couldn't have written a better post.
I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your blog post.
I appreciated that you included the prompt your post was written in response to.
IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done! 
As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.
CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your "My Biggest Worry" blog post, and empathized with your sentiments and thoughts that you expressed in it.
Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, logic, and writing with the Writing.Com community!
Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!
May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance, during your anniversary month, and always!
PWheeler
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