Review of Of Walruses and Eggmen

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Of Walruses and Eggmen

[13+]
Chased by false promises, Manuel seeks a new life for his family before it's too late
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#4826074

Review of Of Walruses and Eggmen

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Rated: 13+

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OFFICIAL JUDGE'S REVIEW

Hello iKïyå§ama-Happy 25th!

Thank you for taking the time to enter the June 2025 round of the "Invalid Item" .

Enclosed please find the following official judges' review, for your consideration.

Positives

Wow, this was a really powerful (and timely!) story. It was visceral and compelling and troubling in all the right ways. Excellent job!

Suggestions

No suggestions for improvement.

Overall

Overall, I'm really impressed by this piece. It was well written and completely compelling. Great work!

I hope you've found this review helpful, and thank you again for entering the contest!

Respectfully,

Jeff is Gru in #2343485

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