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Woke Open in new Window. [E]
A detective’s final case and hope for the future…
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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I enjoyed this first entry in your anthology collection. You established the characters of Dan and Reema well, along with their circumstances. If I had one suggestion, it would be to finesse the introductory scene a bit as it read as really expository and unrealistic for a conversation that a married couple (who already know each other and their situation) would be having. Other than that, though, I enjoyed the read!


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