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Monica Open in new Window. [E]
A foster child, a carnival and Dr. Pepper Peeps...
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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The interactions between Monica and Dan in this story are really endearing. You did a great job describing a low-key normal situation and letting the characters and the interplay between them shine. This might be my favorite story in the collection so far. Well done!


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