Princess Megan has an Associates Of Art Degree in Journalism and diplomas in Free Lance Writing and Short Story Writing. I have 2 published novels: Passage To Romance and Princess Of Scruples. I work as a Qualified Medication Assistant in mental health. I am married and have a striped gray cat named Tigger. I am a Moderator at Writing.com I am also a Creative Scrapbook Designer and writing is my passion. Check out my stories in my Port.
I enjoyed reading your Fantasy poem! The first verse hooked me and set the scene nicely. I liked how you wrote how the trees smelled as the princess ran through it. The next verse shows some of the conflict she feels by how her father acts toward her with the knight she loves. She meets a fairy and wolf a long the way, and I thought it ended in a beautiful way.
The only feedback I have for your consideration is to watch a couple of word repeats, which are found in these stanzas: the Princess and her hand. It's not crucial or anything, but for me, it slowed it down a little for me. I think it would be great to update your description to draw in more readers because it's a beautiful poem.
You do well with your descriptions to make the scene come alive, and it was easy for me to visualize the scene. It told a whole story, and you captured all of the elements to write a nice Fantasy poem!
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