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Positives
I really enjoyed this monologue. The creative interpretation of classic holiday legends and mythology was really well done, and the crude presentation really worked to make a memorable piece. Well done!
Suggestions
No specific suggestions for improvement.
Overall
Overall, I thought you did a good job with this piece. Nice work!
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