Review of Time's Come - InkSpot.Com
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About This Author
Writing poetry allows me to exercise my imagination and share it with others. I strive to write for the benefit of the reader using carnival fun mirror images of my life's experiences.
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| Time's Come Winner of 24 Syllable Poetry Contest |
| Hi Vanishing Vapor I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration. Positives I really enjoyed this poem. 24 syllables is not a lot of space to compose a compelling poem, but you did a great job and made it seem easy. Well done! Suggestions No specific suggestions for improvement. Overall Overall, this piece was short, to the point, and effective. Nice work! I hope you've found this review helpful. If so, please consider paying it forward by reviewing the work of another Writing.com author! Sincerely, Jeff "Rating & Reviewing Philosophy"
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