Review of Time's Come - InkSpot.Com
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Writing poetry allows me to exercise my imagination and share it with others. I strive to write for the benefit of the reader using carnival fun mirror images of my life's experiences.
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Time's Come Open in new Window. [E]
Winner of 24 Syllable Poetry Contest
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Vanishing Vapor Author Icon

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I really enjoyed this poem. 24 syllables is not a lot of space to compose a compelling poem, but you did a great job and made it seem easy. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, this piece was short, to the point, and effective. Nice work!


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