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From the master to the slave
by Kristi Love Author Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi Kristi Love Author Icon

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and am sending the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I thought you did a great job with this poem. The image adds a lot of nuance and additional impact but even without it, the poem was well-structured, evocative, and easy to read. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I really enjoyed this piece. Nice work!


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