 My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
 THE MEMOIR
Amethyst Snow Angel   shares how she found Writing.com and how she came to enjoy the Website.
 WHAT I LIKED
I loved the voice of the story. It was rich and honest, filled with highs and lows and spoke to the heart.
 POV NARRATION/TENSE
This is told in the first person. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.
THEME
For me, I picked out the theme of growth. There's a lot of growth here - On the surface, there's growth in writing, and honestly, I've read several stories by Amethyst and they are very dynamic. I've enjoyed everything I've read. On a deeper level, you can see emotional growth as well, and the continued to desire to keep growing in these areas.
EMOTIONAL BEATS
How well does the emotional beat resonate with the reader?  Great; Good; Okay.
As our author goes from achievement to achievement, the emotional heartbeat of the story grows rich and fulfilling.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to bring the memoir to life.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening intrigues the reader with a push/pull grab and then hooks us the reviews she received and the gift subscription. The writing is candid, honest, and sincere. Thank you for sharing a very inspirational story.
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