Greetings, Petra!
I discovered this by using the Random Read and Review button 
I love what you've done here, showcasing a piece of poetry from your favorite artist and embedding the painting that inspired the poem. It makes perfect sense, introducing us to a poet who questions social standings and looks at life from a fresh and vivid perspective. Two dead peacocks, indeed. Why? A creepy painting is given a memorable backstory, as we see the poor innocent girl watching something she has no idea what purpose it serves.
I like how you've included both your own praise for the book of poetry as well as the professional review quotes. The presentation fits together and makes sense, being easy to understand and navigate in the context.
I'll make my usual suggestions for Size 4 Verdana font, which will create a more open and engaging reading experience across devices. I would also recommend centering the painting, though perhaps that's not necessary. Also, would you be interested in writing a "tribute poem," something on this page that is inspired by your favorite poetry? That would tie everything together with your own work and show us how much you've learned from the other poet.
Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing   
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 You responded to this review 11/08/2025 @ 2:58am EST |
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