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I really enjoyed this story. You did a good job telling a compelling story, with characters that the reader cares about. Daniel tracking down his Myra was believable and realistic, and I thought you did a good job with the exchange between all three of the characters once he arrives at Trent's house.
For me, the ending felt just a little anticlimactic. You did such a great job of setting up the danger of this scenario Myra (and Daniel) find themselves in, but then they escape when Trent just wanders inside and stays there long enough for Daniel and Myra to escape. I was really hoping for a little more tension and conflict at the end of this compelling story.
Overall, though, this was an engaging, well-written story. Nice work!
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