Review of The Festival of Forever

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The Festival of Forever

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At the festival of forever, every song is a requiem.
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Review of The Festival of Forever

Review by Jeff

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Rated: 13+

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This was a great take on the prompt! There were so many aspects of the prompt to include, and you worked all of them into a framework that really made the most of all the different elements. Nice work!

The detail and description in the story was excellent, as was the relationship between Jon and Amy. You could feel Jon's excitement, and Amy's desire for him to be happy, even if she had misgivings about the event from the start.

I also really liked the twist ending, and how things resolved. You did a great job of establishing a ton of possibilities for what was going to happen, and still managed to surprise me with how it actually turned out. This was a great story!

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Respectfully,

Jeff

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