Hello,

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and would like to offer the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I'm not familiar with this particular form of poetry, but it was great to learn something new and, as far as I can tell, you did a great job of adhering to the form. The imagery was excellent and the flow and structure was quite good. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, this was an enjoyable poem to read. Nice work!

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