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Given: Dec 11, 2025 at 7:17pm
Length: 1,250 Characters |
1,117 w/o WritingML
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE POEM
A poem about what happens when the Tetris doesn't make it.
WHAT I LIKED
I loved the vivid action which was portrayed using a good economy of words.
STRUCTURE
This is a tetractys poem with a link that explains the type. I hadn't seen it before so I learned something new.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "Quicker, more frenetic they start to fall." I read this line and felt rushed, danger, oh no! Yikes...! Sigh... Those blocks are falling and I failed to complete my mission. Well done, capturing the moment of excitement and disaster.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening paints a vivid of picture which invites the reader in. The title is a nice play on words reflecting the theme of the poem. I enjoyed learning about the form and how one can capture emotions using just the right words.
Review #4847387
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE POEM
WHAT I LIKED
STRUCTURE
You responded to this review 12/12/2025 @ 12:18pm EST