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Ashes of Port Royal Open in new Window. [E]
A grieving boy trades sorrow for steel, joining a pirate crew to survive.
by Lonewolf Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello,

I discovered your item on Writing.com via random Read & Review and would like to offer the following feedback for your consideration.


Positives

I thought you did a good job setting up the character of Blackburn and establishing his earliest exploits. Three hundred words isn't a lot of space to work with, but you managed to tell a compelling and fully-realized story in that span of time. Well done!


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, this was a great read, and it's an excellent take on the prompt. Nice work!


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Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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