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Given: Jan 6, 2026 at 5:10pm
Length: 1,068 Characters |
949 w/o WritingML
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE POEM
The poem was a nice tribute to birds.
WHAT I LIKED
I loved the word painting of the birds, just hanging out and enjoying life on the branches.
STRUCTURE
This is a cinquain, a short unrhymed poem. The type of poem is explained in the item.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "Chirping, munching," These are two great action verbs which describe what birds do. Thy chirp, they munch. It's easy to see a bird just doing this and being happy.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening invites the reader in with an easy word - birdies. The title is a great fit for the poem. I enjoyed this poem for it's entertainment and it's teaching aspects.
Review #4851045
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.
THE POEM
WHAT I LIKED
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